| Grex > Poetry > #217: the business world |
| response 8 of 10: | 
Oct 6 01:33 UTC 2000 |
yeah..I thought of that..I dind't like the frist one, so I attempted writing a second...and failed twice!! Some things are hard to write in a good way..
| response 9 of 10: |
Oct 6 15:53 UTC 2000 |
you didn't fail exactly. there's potential, and where there's a seed, somethign will grow.
| response 10 of 10: |
Oct 28 01:43 UTC 2000 |
resp:5 resp:7 that's an idea. Both poems were good, but the idea of combining them.. hmm.. yeah, maybe that will yield something more. I've realized, Megan, that writing is a continual process-- my work has changed so much since I started here. Keep it up; watching someone's potential flower and bloom is as much fun as breathing in the final results. I think that observing the process gives one a reason to appreciate strides even more.