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pvn
response 75 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 4 06:59 UTC 2003

Yeah, but.  Is grammar the ruler of expression or is it nothing more
than a tool to aid in expression.  I am thinking I recall a situation of
english speaking not boss who's actors fun of made who angry exclaimed
"you may think I don't know fuck, but I know fuck all!".  Understood him
I did.
md
response 76 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 4 16:25 UTC 2003

Most grammars merely describe how people used the language back when 
the grammarian was learning it, with the addition of a few of the 
grammarian's pet peeves -- an error somebody once caught him in that 
he's been brooding over and consequently wants to convert into a quasi-
correct or exceptionally correct usage.  But there are no objective 
standards to refer to, only a faded snapshot of an active process.  To 
those who learned it forty years before, it will sound lax and vulgar; 
to those who learn it forty years later, it will sound pompous and old-
fashioned.  
klg
response 77 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 4 16:34 UTC 2003

re:  "#73 (orinoco):  ... But for those who wouldn't know a good
sentence if it up and bit them, following the "rules" is a way to avoid 
some of the worst pitfalls.  (I think the worst example of this is the 
"rule" against using the passive voice.  Good writers use the passive 
voice from time to time.  But since some bad writers use it constantly,_ 
English teachers have started telling their students not to use it at 
all.  The one about split infinitives doesn't bother me as much, but it 
strikes me as a similarly fake rule, made to stop people from coming up 
with atrocities like flem's in #70.)

According to our spouse, grammar is not taught in elementary school.  So 
by the time the students reach the upper grades, I suspect teachers are 
now "giving up" on the whole concept of proper word usage.  She 
constantly is telling us about the grammar errors made by the younger 
teachers.  We would bet that if we asked those teachers what passive 
voice or split infitives, they'd stare at us like a deer caught in a 
car's headlights.
pvn
response 78 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 5 07:55 UTC 2003

What is passive vice?
jaklumen
response 79 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 5 10:03 UTC 2003

That's a good question.  In the active voice, the author/subject is 
the subjective pronoun, I believe (coming before the verb).  You 
use "I" a lot.   In the passive voice, the author/subject is the 
objective pronoun-- using lots of "me's" (it occured to me, it dawned 
upon my mind).  The narrator seems to be acted upon by inanimate 
concepts.  I realize this is a poor explanation, but this is best how 
I remember it. 
i
response 80 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 5 11:25 UTC 2003

Active voice:  "We f*cked up"
Passive voice:  "Mistakes were made by us"  (The "by us" is often dropped...)
jmsaul
response 81 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 5 14:39 UTC 2003

Re #78:  You just lie there.
jazz
response 82 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 5 14:58 UTC 2003

        Re #75:

        Sometimes I can understand people when they break the rules of grammar
for the way they're speaking, sometimes I can't.  Someone could speak fluent
dancehall ragga, and I'd probably be left going, "uhmmmm what?"  
russ
response 83 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 5 19:28 UTC 2003

Passive vice:  Bookies stuff gambling winnings in your pocket as
you're walking down the street minding your own business.
pvn
response 84 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 6 04:49 UTC 2003

I should be so lucky.
keesan
response 85 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 6 06:11 UTC 2003

From a book of house plans - 
Windows are inadequate in number and insufficient in size.
This elegant design blends high vogue with a restful character.
A flexible interior enjoys modern space that welcomes sunlight.
Come home to spectacular views and livability.
majestic curb appeal
A taste of Europe is reflected..
This sensational design is sweetly luxurious....
an unrestrained floor plan
rich with reminiscent detailing
The combination of stacked stone, brick and siding [sic] add [sic] warmth
Kitchen and dining spaces lack windows and imagination
There is no focal point to draw one's eye as they approach the home.
open planning offers an aura (!) of spaciousness
Walls of windows provide a front row seat to enjoy nature's bounty....

If you can't write, sell houses.
pvn
response 86 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 6 06:19 UTC 2003

Probably more money in it right about now.
keesan
response 87 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 7 06:23 UTC 2003

Can anyone rewrite all these sentences to be both grammatical and meaningful?
For instace 'a feeling of spaciousness'.
gull
response 88 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 7 13:32 UTC 2003

Grammer rules always make me feel stupid.  (Err, sorry.  Passive voice,
there.  I guess I mean, "I always feel stupid when people bring up
grammar rules."  Better?)  I know I violate them all the time but I can
never keep track of all of them.
jazz
response 89 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 7 13:37 UTC 2003

        The passive voice is legitimate, as far as I know, but it does bring
up a good point.  The two sentences have different meanings - either a is
acting on b, or is acting on a.  The first sentence implies grammar rules or
grammarians make you feel a certain way, the second implies that you choose
to feel a certain way because of grammar nazis.  Oddly, I kind of feel like
one now ... :?
md
response 90 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 7 15:28 UTC 2003

[There is no passive verb in "Grammer rules always make me feel 
stupid."]

Passives become a problem mainly when people use them to hide 
responsibility.  Constructions like "I was told..." and "The decision 
was made..." are commonplace in corporations and government.  They've 
become so automatic now that they don't infallibly tell you the speaker 
is a weasel anymore.  Consider it possible, though, especially if you 
ask "Who told you?" or "Who made the decision?" and don't get an answer.
jazz
response 91 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 7 15:30 UTC 2003

        Syntactic deletions and nominalizations are fun.

        Like the sentence "The enterprise infrastructure was leveraged to good
end."  It means absolutely nothing. 
rcurl
response 92 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 7 15:46 UTC 2003

Sure it does. It means the business was improved.
gull
response 93 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 7 15:47 UTC 2003

Re #90: Argh.  There, you see the problem?  I don't even understand the
rules...no matter how many times "active voice" and "passive voice" are
explained to me, I can't reliably tell them apart.  I guess it's a good
thing I'm not trying to make a career out of writing.  I worry that I
seem less intelligent to other people because of this kind of thing.

Re #91: I run into a lot of sentences like that in job postings.  HR
people also love to take technical terms they vaguely understand and
apply them to human situations, like this comment I found in an actual
posting: "Must be able to work well in an interrupt-driven environment."
rcurl
response 94 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 7 16:00 UTC 2003

If they want computer expertise, they should say so.
slynne
response 95 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 7 20:03 UTC 2003

Dont feel bad, gull. I have a grammar point that I have trouble 
understanding even though it has been explained to me millions of time. 
I just have a mental block about it. 

If anyone wants to take another shot at it, feel free. I always 
confuse "affect" and "effect" when they are used as verbs. I dont have 
trouble with them as nouns. 
jor
response 96 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 7 20:09 UTC 2003

        Owch, I see  this more and more: except used for accept.
        "The client found the product exceptable" Ow Ow Ow.

        I'm not too clear on what Keesan doesn't like in her
        examples.

keesan
response 97 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 7 21:28 UTC 2003

A bit of bad grammar and lack of any meaning.
other
response 98 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 8 03:27 UTC 2003

#95:  

"The earthquake affected 200,000 people in the vicinity of Lima."
"The earthquake effected the destruction of $2,000,000 worth of 
property."
(If you reversed these, it would be like saying that the earthquake MADE 
200,000 people, and that it in some way altered the destruction, but 
didn't necessarily cause it.)

"Change is constant.  You can effect change, but you cannot affect it."
(This means that you can introduce change into an existing scenario, but 
you cannot alter the concept of change itself.)
rcurl
response 99 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 8 05:35 UTC 2003

effect = cause
affect = act on
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