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Mar 8 11:50 UTC 2000

man, I have missed out on quite a bit around here! while the discussion sounds
like it's come to a head; I thought I might just add that I know *exactly*
how Jon feels.(lot of stories that really demonstate why "nice guys always
finish last"). But I like how "visually" your poem breaks out of the "norm",
and challenges us to chase both the new *structure* as well as your agnst @
an obviously disturbing topic :). I also like how you grouped your ideas, kept
things nice and tidy for me...but that's probably cos I know where you're
coming from.