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zoe
response 6 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 7 04:20 UTC 1999

life is pain... 
logansan
response 7 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 7 21:58 UTC 1999

        My fellow poet/artist .... I offer you what ever little comfort I
might. my best wishes and toughts. There is more to life than pain. Your words
have done so much for me, even this peice of raw force, blunt trama .... it's
taken me close to two days to get back here to make a 'r'.
        You are one of the best, zoe frost, I salute you.
                                signed; John
cloud
response 8 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 00:02 UTC 1999

re:6

"Anyone who tells you differently is trying to sell you something," eh?
bookworm
response 9 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 00:36 UTC 1999

Amen. <removes her hat>  A moment of silence in memory of the loss of 
our innocence, please.
zoe
response 10 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 15:14 UTC 1999

i hope you all realize that i'm afraid to post stuff now, since you 
have high expectations....
brighn
response 11 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 15:54 UTC 1999

Pain is pain.
Life is life.
Life has pain.
Pain has life.
Life is not pain.
Pain is not life.

And when my innocence died, I lit a bonfire and had a party.
Innocence ain't anything like what it's cracked up to be.
zoe
response 12 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 16:05 UTC 1999

it matters who's life you're living i supose...
allida
response 13 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 19:30 UTC 1999

no it only matters how one perceives one's life as to whether it is indeed
pain instead of just having pain in it.  
bookworm
response 14 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 19:36 UTC 1999

Don't let the criticism of the masses stop you from posting, Zoe.  Take 
it as constructive or, if you don't like it, ignore it.  

On the other hand, you don't have to post if you don't want to.  
However, we'll be less for it because we won't have your brilliant 
poetry to read anymore.

Is that as clear as mud?
lumen
response 15 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 22:31 UTC 1999

re: resp:5  Please do not take what I said the wrong way; when I read a 
very disturbing poem, I tend to take it very seriously unless the author 
says that he/she is detached from the poem in some way.

Joe posted a story once where the main character killed a hitchhiker in 
cold blood.  He explained he had absolutely no experience in killing.

I frequently use poetry to express my fears, frustrations, and various 
moods, mixed as they sometimes can be from time to time.  I've also been 
in therapy for a long time, long enough that I take notice when someone 
posts something melancholy.

Zoe, please don't think I criticized you-- from the most bitter trials 
and hardship come the sweetest fruits.  Sometimes, rose bushes won't 
grow well unless you dig the whole sucker up, turn it 180 degrees, and 
replant it.  Please do not think that we expect differently from you.  
We have been very impressed, and no one would think less of you if you 
didn't always write your best poetry.
zoe
response 16 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 9 00:03 UTC 1999

i didn't take anything personally.. fear not, for i'd rather spend all 
day on the poetry confrence <<like i did today>> than anything else.. 
citisim or not..
this was just a painful thought that i've been holding since childhood 
that i needed to share.. it wasn't to be liked... it was like life; 
cold, harsh facts dished out for the sake of itself. 

toking
response 17 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 9 17:12 UTC 1999

"it was like life; 
 cold, harsh facts dished out for the sake of itself. "

If I ever write a book, I'm stealing this line and using it as the firs
and last in the book.
zoe
response 18 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 9 19:45 UTC 1999

i'm honored you see so much in my words..
bookworm
response 19 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 10 05:46 UTC 1999

we *All* see a lot in your words.
brighn
response 20 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 10 15:52 UTC 1999

don't speak for all of us, Julie
lumen
response 21 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 11 06:31 UTC 1999

why-- you don't agree, Paul?

I can see why Joe wants to steal that line-- it's very eloquent.
brighn
response 22 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 11 22:38 UTC 1999

I don't like being spoken for, Jon.
Beyond that, I'm not going to comment.
lumen
response 23 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 12 19:43 UTC 1999

s'ok, Paul, I understand-- I was just curious.  As for Julie, she likes 
to sound as supportive as she can.
toking
response 24 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 17 18:37 UTC 1999

(linked to the new poetry conf)
bookworm
response 25 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 22 07:28 UTC 1999

okay, okay.  

I apologize, Paul.

It wasn't my intention to be offensive.

Still, *don't* you find meaning in her words?
brighn
response 26 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 22 17:37 UTC 1999

I don't think it's fair to ask qa question that I've already strongly implied
I don't wish to answer publicly.
bookworm
response 27 of 27: Mark Unseen   Feb 22 21:57 UTC 1999

okay.  
Sorry for pushing.
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