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freedom
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response 6 of 10:
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Oct 4 23:09 UTC 2000 |
*giggle* thanks flem!! :) Perhaps I should stop writing!!!hehe
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orinoco
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response 7 of 10:
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Oct 5 15:17 UTC 2000 |
Well, I agree with flem that the two poems cover much of the same ground.
There are bits of both I like, and you could probably get some good milage
out of combining them.
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freedom
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response 8 of 10:
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Oct 6 01:33 UTC 2000 |
yeah..I thought of that..I dind't like the frist one, so I attempted writing
a second...and failed twice!! Some things are hard to write in a good way..
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arianna
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response 9 of 10:
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Oct 6 15:53 UTC 2000 |
you didn't fail exactly.
there's potential, and where there's a seed, somethign will grow.
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lumen
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response 10 of 10:
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Oct 28 01:43 UTC 2000 |
resp:5 resp:7 that's an idea.
Both poems were good, but the idea of combining them.. hmm..
yeah, maybe that will yield something more.
I've realized, Megan, that writing is a continual process-- my work
has changed so much since I started here. Keep it up; watching
someone's potential flower and bloom is as much fun as
breathing in the final results. I think that observing the process
gives one a reason to appreciate strides even more.
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