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katie
response 45 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 1 21:47 UTC 2003

An editorial in the AA News last week referred to "certified pubic
accountants."
katie
response 46 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 1 21:47 UTC 2003

  (eewww.)
jaklumen
response 47 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 1 23:42 UTC 2003

resp:44 I've never heard of "to all intansive purpose," either.  Maybe 
we should respell that?
russ
response 48 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 2 02:08 UTC 2003

I've seen peddlers selling ID cards identifying the bearer as a
"CERTIFIED PUBIC ASSASSIN".  Apparently some pubes deserve to die.
other
response 49 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 2 05:10 UTC 2003

I received a (supposed) humor email containing the phrase "for all 
intensive purposes" in a context which suggested that the author was not 
aware of the correct phrase.
md
response 50 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 2 14:54 UTC 2003

Re #29: "I do not know of any grammatical rule violations that improve 
clarity. Examples, please?"

"When the judge entered the courtroom, everyone stood on their feet" is 
clear, and grammatically incorrect.  

"When the judge entered the courtroom, everyone stood on his feet" is 
grammatically correct, but unclear.
rcurl
response 51 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 2 15:02 UTC 2003

They seem equally clear to me, though it is unfortunate that English
doesn't have a generally useful singular neuter pronoun for people.
However this is recognized in my dictionary, which has: 

"their, gen. pl. of the demonstrative pron.........: often used
colloquially with a singular antecedent (as, everybody, somebody,
everyone)."

I don't think that makes the usage *incorrect*.

Better example, please.

jazz
response 52 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 2 15:24 UTC 2003

        Merriam-Webster seems to think it's valid to use either "their" or
"his".  "Their" is more colloquially correct in modern American English, and
"his" sounds more like something one would say in British Parlaiment.  But
several dictionaries agree that *both* are grammatically correct.
gregb
response 53 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 2 16:52 UTC 2003

Re. #51:  "They seem equally clear to me..."  The first says everybody 
stood up.  The second implies that they stood on the Judge's feet.
mynxcat
response 54 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 2 17:04 UTC 2003

Exactly. I would go with the first sentence.
other
response 55 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 2 17:41 UTC 2003

The lack if clarity is in the word "everyone," which is technically a 
singular form, but has come to be a plural form in its usage.  If you 
break it into two words, then the meaning is clearly singular, which may 
be why it is such a challenge for formalists to accept the combined form 
as a plural.
gull
response 56 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 2 18:22 UTC 2003

Re #45: When I was in high school, I worked at the Alma Public Access
Channel.  That same typo, dropping the "l" from "Public", happened there
once.  Fortunately, I wasn't the one who did it. ;>
jmsaul
response 57 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 2 21:33 UTC 2003

The rule against splitting infinitives can lead to some pretty ugly stuff too
(and should never have been grafted onto English from Latin in the first
place).
flem
response 58 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 2 21:37 UTC 2003

Have to disagree there.  I suppose it's possible that there are situations
in which a split infinitive is the clearest way to express something, but the
vast majority of them that I see can be avoided fairly easily with a little
thought, and the resulting sentence is almost always clearer for it. 
md
response 59 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 2 22:26 UTC 2003

My favorite don't-end-with-a-preposition sentence: 

Mom brings book to child's room to read bedtime story.  It is child's 
least favorite book.  Child asks: "What did you bring that book I don't 
like to be read to out of up for?"  
dcat
response 60 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 2 22:37 UTC 2003

"Ending sentences with prepositions is something up with which we shall not
put!"  -- Winston Churchill
jmsaul
response 61 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 3 02:33 UTC 2003

Re #58:  Okay.  So why would "To go boldly where no man has gone before"
         have been superior to what they actually used on Star Trek?
cmcgee
response 62 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 3 03:14 UTC 2003

Boldly to go where no man has gone before.
other
response 63 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 3 04:54 UTC 2003

Spare me your restrictions on the licensure of poets.
jmsaul
response 64 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 3 13:27 UTC 2003

Re #62:  That one's so strained, it's almost incomprehensible.  The "no
         split infinitives" rule is silly.  It has no place in English.
flem
response 65 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 3 14:13 UTC 2003

My high school calculus teacher used to call your method of argument "proof
by intimidation".  

I'm all about #62.  I admit taht "to go boldly" scans poorly, the rhythmic
structure is awkward.  "Boldly to go" doesn't have that problem.  Claiming
that it's strained smacks loudly of circularity.  
rcurl
response 66 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 3 14:28 UTC 2003

"Boldly to go" is exceptionally awkward, IMO. We sit and wait for the sentence
to have a subject...and finally discover it doesn't even  have one. 
flem
response 67 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 3 14:37 UTC 2003

This is somehow different from the case for "to boldly go"?  
rcurl
response 68 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 3 15:12 UTC 2003

Not very. I suppose "To go boldly" could be the subject of a sentence ("To
go boldly is admirable"), but it turns out that isn't the subject. This
pseudo subject becomes even less clear by the inversion of the customary
word order. I agree there is "poetic license", especially when one is
writing poetry, but that does not always have a primary objective of
clarity. So, are we discussing this as poetry, or as clear expression? 

cmcgee
response 69 of 111: Mark Unseen   Jul 3 15:45 UTC 2003

The "sentence" doesn't have a subject.  It's a sentence fragment to start
with.
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