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lumen
response 3 of 6: Mark Unseen   Feb 18 00:45 UTC 1999

ugh.  Was that the effect you intended?  If so, you've done a marvelous 
job.  Very nice touch on a hint of symbolism.
toking
response 4 of 6: Mark Unseen   Feb 18 16:48 UTC 1999

when I write I'm genrally just trying to get something out of my head,
I'm not necessarily "trying" to give off some sort of effect, just an
impression. When i wrote this I'd been going over the same stupid little
thing in my head for a couple days, and it was like that sceen in
Hellraiser 2 when the crazy guy is let out of his straight jacket and he
starts hacking at his arms t try and get the maggots away, that's kinda
how I felt about gtting this silly little idea out of my head, I just
hept picking at it and pickiung at it and all it did was make it worse
so I"d try and stop but then when I wasn't paying any attention I"d
catch myself thinking about it again (rubbing and scratching and
cutting, but it wasn't doing any good, `cause the maggots are still
there and I'd have to rub harder and scratch fiercer and cut deeper,
`cause you can feel `em eating you away from the inside out and the
outside in all at once)

anyway...
sarkhel
response 5 of 6: Mark Unseen   Apr 11 21:04 UTC 2002

May I display a link for my poetries? www.poetry.com and write my name DEBAYAN
(first) SARKHEL (last). I am sorry to include this in response but i have no
other choice since I am being denied for "enter"
morwen
response 6 of 6: Mark Unseen   Apr 12 15:14 UTC 2002

resp:2 are we restarting then?  I'm not sure that we get enough 
activity here that a restart would be valuable.
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