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jshafer
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response 3 of 8:
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Jun 20 02:36 UTC 1999 |
I agree with orinoco on the first stanza. I'm pretty indifferent
about the other two, not that I'm suggesting you change them or
anything.
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lumen
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response 4 of 8:
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Jun 20 04:57 UTC 1999 |
resp:2 letdown? Once we got well into the air, we started getting used to
it.
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orinoco
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response 5 of 8:
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Jun 20 20:39 UTC 1999 |
Fine, then I'd like to see her demonstrate that relief and adjustment as
well as she demonstrates the awkwardness in the first stanza.
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bookworm
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response 6 of 8:
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Jun 22 17:20 UTC 1999 |
We'll see. I'll have to work on that a tad.
I was working, initially from the impressions I got from looking out the window
of the plane. We had airsickness all the way over. On the way back I just
had elevator sickness. Much better.
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toking
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response 7 of 8:
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Jun 22 17:31 UTC 1999 |
isn't flying the coolest thing? If I could afford it, I"d never step on
solid ground ever again
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bookworm
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response 8 of 8:
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Jun 24 18:47 UTC 1999 |
for me it was more or less a spiritual experience. That's why, after I
managed to get "off the ground", I lapsed a bit into the "spiritual"
aspect.
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