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Feb 5 03:04 UTC 1999 |
err... I'm re-posting this from another item, where it was,
(I think) misplaced. I felt that it would gain more attention in it's own
spot...
just a musing
love does not command
love does not demand
it frees your mind
does not keep you in a bind
for binds bring sorrow
and everything is gone by tomorrow
and then there is pain
and we see that everything was in vain
love is not pleasure
love is not sorrow
love is no toy
for love is sheer joy
(penned this down a few days back....and found this poetry room here so just
thought would put it here )
--By Rajababu
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Feb 5 03:07 UTC 1999 |
There. Now then-- This is really nice! I like the effective use of rhyme
to get the idea across. It lends it a deft, light feel. Very nice, and I
hope to see more from you.
Welcome to Poetry!
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rajababu
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Feb 5 06:49 UTC 1999 |
we ride this boat
with image and fear as our coat
when shall we see
that love, is simply to be
with our past
as our mast
we ride and ride
and in this illusion take pride
this boat we call life
and to live it we strife
when shall we see
that love, is simply to be
( speaking(cloud) thanks for posting it to the right place :)
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