Grex Poetry3 Conference

Item 94: The Creator

Entered by flem on Fri Jun 4 02:44:16 1999:

1 new of 6 responses total.

#1 of 6 by orinoco on Sun Jun 6 22:30:44 1999:

This is a wonderful idea - especially the last line.  The image of the artist
as God is pretty common, but the idea of the artists creations loving him as
he loves God is a twist I haven't seen before, and I like it.  

The only complaint I have is that some of the line breaks are in awkward
places.  Splitting "wooden men" across a line break is especially clunky. 
Is there some sort of meter scheme here that I'm not seeing that forces you
to break the line there? 

Other than that, as I said before, I like this a lot.

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