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dan and I always seem to like the pieces that are short, simple and sometimes weird or vague. the picture this one paints is like one of those little snapshots of your thoughts and your feelings. sometimes little snapshots are the best way to appeal to one's own thoughts and feelings. people try so hard to put their every emotion and thought into words, and then call it p oetry, and sometimes it achieves that status... but other times, the least amount said is exactly enough to fill the cup to the brim without spilling over. <erinn is reminded of the poem she wrote called "Bubble">
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