"Silence" Silence A small spot of emptiness Where echos cease to exist And the gentle thump thump Chug thump Skips a chug or a thump And I could swear it's a heart attack Or the beginning of my demise But I close my eyes And clench my teeth And there you are Pristine clarity shows me the way I reach out Touch your hand And the silence stops The spot is filled3 responses total.
"skips a chug or a thump" - nice allusive way of describing it.
I agree
This is lovely.
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