Grex Poetry3 Conference

Item 29: To a Cliff

Entered by allida on Tue Feb 9 06:33:12 1999:

You stand
horible on some rocky shore
with wind and water
lashing you through eternity.
Along I come, 
a gust against your holey
side and I intrude
into your inmost recesses
blowing sand and waterdrops
against their tender crevices
cutting away through 
the eternity 
you have existed
I am ephemeral, one second
eternally felt
as i race through 
your crannies leaving only
the deepest untouched. 
She fills in the places that 
I have missed 
When the moon pulls the tide in
at high tide you lay submerged
in her icy depths 
I blow over her skin 
creating ripples in her
whch channel through 
your holes and ease
the pain I ripped through
as I gusted
6 responses total.
#1 of 6 by toking on Tue Feb 9 18:15:15 1999:

beautiful....absolutely beautiful

#2 of 6 by zoe on Tue Feb 9 19:48:57 1999:

it flows so perfectly... a true peice of of being.. i love it..

#3 of 6 by bookworm on Wed Feb 10 05:55:04 1999:

Hmm.. This piece makes me think..

That makes it good.

#4 of 6 by logansan on Wed Feb 10 18:28:32 1999:

        Lonely, beautiful and .... rewarding :)

#5 of 6 by lumen on Thu Feb 11 06:47:14 1999:

this poem makes me feel like I'm in a dreamscape.. I can see the imagery in
my mind, and it's just harmonious..

#6 of 6 by toking on Wed Feb 17 19:05:18 1999:

(linked to the new poetry conf)

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