Grex Poetry3 Conference

Item 196: Small Talk in Intimate Settings, by Cloud

Entered by cloud on Fri Jun 2 08:54:05 2000:

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#2 of 6 by orinoco on Fri Jun 2 14:39:44 2000:

        You talk about the whales,
        but I'm 10,000 leagues away,
        fathoming the menu, and eyeing the shrimp.

--nice.  You might wanna try to make the connection between what you're doing
and the topic of conversation that clear in all of them -- I think I can find
connections for the other stanzas, but they're not all so obvious, and so it
was a little confusing the first time I read it.  

This is cool, though.  Something about the tone, I'm not sure what it is, but
it's really nice.

(P.S. "your" not "you're")

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