Hi, I was just wondering where all the poetry was? I'm a 1st year, comp.sci. major @ Auckland University, New Zealand. Ok, I'll just make one up... ----Forget It: by redanjel---- I called out. You broke down. funny how, I was wrong. I moved out. You fell down. laugh. The irony of lost love, found. It doesn't matter, I stopped you for a reason, but in your eyes I found my answer... You miss me. And I don't care.So think again. Bitch.4 responses total.
Wow. This piece sounds so violently angry. Good job.
slick...very slick rolls a bit too fast to be so short...but well executed all the same
cheers. *lol, it was about 3am when I wrote it, and the first thing that came to mind was my last girlfriend...but I'm the one who screwed things up, but being male--couldn't blame myself for my own mistakes :) That's the violent part of it. it's short & fast cos I fell asleep :)
Don't worry about it. The great thing about Poetry Conf is that you can change your material (albeit not the original, but still...)
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