Grex Poetry3 Conference

Item 111: Blind betrayel

Entered by pain on Fri Jul 9 18:11:20 1999:

This light above me
The ground below
The truth blinds me
What it is I do not know

This wall infront of me
Blocking my path
Bordom plagues me
Inspiring its wrath

This dagger hurts me
The wielder turns away
This anger burns me
I have gon astray

This pain stabs me 
I grasp my heart
My rage betrays me
Tearing me apart
5 responses total.
#1 of 5 by pain on Fri Jul 9 18:14:42 1999:

It seems a bit quiet around these parts so I decided to dip into some of my
lesser works. Maybe with some help I can finish/fix them.

#2 of 5 by dea on Wed Jul 14 09:56:31 1999:

yet more happyness i see:)

#3 of 5 by flem on Tue Jul 20 15:43:16 1999:

hmm....  <flem has an idea...>

#4 of 5 by freedom on Tue Dec 7 06:58:22 1999:

simple, yet nice

#5 of 5 by ponder on Wed Jan 12 02:06:54 2000:

The rhythm is kinda wierd on this.  Oddly enough, though, it fits pretty 
well.

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