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Silent Sleep Images what does it mean when you reach a place where life is a dream? what can it mean? Some prelude to a private death? A silence which signals a solitary sorrow? i can see chaos coming. whishfully i watch hoping it will signify fulfilment of a personal peace. The thundering torents of rain wash my memories away and all that remains are meaningless images. Calmly I face them in my sleep Creeping forward in my mind they haunt me like ghosts. When I awake I forget them as they fade forever into fantasy. The cruelness is silent but present. what does it mean when your dreams are your life? what can it mean? 'we live as we dream: alone' 4-25-89 GEP
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Hm, I think I have a sort of answer to that one (maybe) from a few years back, but it's in the basement, so remind me later. I like the balance between the first and last stanzas. This poem feels like being a kid watching a storm approach while alone in a quiet house.
It's later... I'm reminding you. :-)
Sorry, I can't find the one I was thinking of, but here's something:
I had a dream
I made it mine
Once in my hand
It turned to dust
I held the dust
And it was gold
It blew away
For me to find
And dream anew.
I wrote that in 1980. I think it's a bit juvenile, but kind of sweet.
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