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Grex Writing Item 35: Etude Somewhat in the Manner of Michael Delizia Writing in the Manner of John Remmers
Entered by remmers on Fri Apr 10 08:55:18 UTC 1992:

    old
    old hippies
    old hippies sitting around
        hippies sitting around talking
                sitting around talking about
                               talking about
                               talking

8 responses total.

#1 of 8 by remmers on Fri Apr 10 08:55:40 1992:

    old
    old hippies
    old hippies talking
        hippies talking about
                talking about changes
                        about changes

#2 of 8 by remmers on Fri Apr 10 08:55:49 1992:

    old
    old hippies
    old hippies about forty
    old hippies about forty or fifty
        hippies about forty or fifty years old
                about forty or fifty years old
                      forty or fifty years old
                               fifty years old
                                           old

#3 of 8 by remmers on Fri Apr 10 08:55:59 1992:

    hippies about forty or fifty years old
    sitting around talking about changes

#4 of 8 by remmers on Fri Apr 10 08:56:37 1992:

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#5 of 8 by denise on Mon Dec 4 23:24:56 2006:

I think Remmers and MD ARE hippies.

#6 of 8 by remmers on Tue Dec 5 11:22:36 2006:

Omigosh - 14+ years separate responses 4 and 5.  I have no memory of
posting this item.  Perhaps that's just as well.  :)

#7 of 8 by mary on Tue Dec 5 13:16:21 2006:

I miss md.

#8 of 8 by denise on Wed Dec 20 00:09:45 2006:

Me, too, Mary.  Is he still in the area?

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