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Grex Writing Item 2: and so comes on the night
Entered by katie on Thu Sep 12 01:56:10 UTC 1991:


              the sun goes down
              the trees become shadows
              the neighborhood cats looking out from their windows
              street lamps unlit loom above like gallows
              and so comes on the night.

              the sky's full of clouds, not a star in sight
              the moon is caught in a tree like a kite
              and sirens wailing like dogs in the night
              are fading eerie echoes.

              the grass is cool, there are no mosquitoes
              an airplane sounds like a violoncello
              so who needs promise of tomorrow?
              this is my kind of night.

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#1 of 2 by remmers on Fri Sep 13 10:11:53 1991:

Nice alliteration in line #4.


#2 of 2 by sanjaym on Sun Apr 28 09:30:08 1996:

nice poetry...

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