Kiss me.
The sun comes down,
My world lights from with in.
I lay my hands on my heart.
I can feel the world racing with in it.
shadows creep, 
but I am like the sun.
I know what it's like to taste purity.
So softly her voice dances through the trees
I hear them sing with their love of her.
I find myself catching sunlight and starlight
winding them through her hair.
She reminds me of angels
so I take myself down to the edge of the water
I watch her where she stands at the to of the hill.
Eyes of Green ....eyes of blue.
Water in my nose and my mouth,
I become a river.
She becomes a cloud.
This is more than friendship
This is less than love.
This is letting someone in your heart,
finding you can never get enough.
this is letting someone touch your soul,
anyway they want.
this is letting hatred go,
watching yourself come apart.
this is ...what I wish I'd never thought.

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The emotoin is awesome. It sounds really personal.
Great line arrangement

thank you, I liked your poems as well.

I really like this poem...
It truly melds opposing things together well...
I like the imagery in it, as well.
I like the "this is friendship, this is less than love".
Truly wonderful portrayal of emotions.

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