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Grex Poetry Item 9: time [linked]
Entered by zoe on Thu Jan 28 20:32:19 UTC 1999:

allow this all to go away,
tortured tears will wash it all away...
time is of your essence,
i have none to spare.
happenings are happening,
changes are changing.
the lords name was vain to me.
hours are my seconds,
condensed and put away.
disappointment,
this is all my disappointment.
falling up and floating down,
i want to just fade away.
to you,
i have no voice,
i have no faith--
my existance is minimal...
i hope you are satisfied.
the click-click of the hateful red hand,
clawing at the iron bars..
monotone lectures lulling me to sleep.
sleep my child,
sleep--
so your soul may be recaptured with the morning's break.
see the world of ice blue glass..
forgive them for what they have done.
just go away,
your tortured tears will surely wash this painful world away....

10 responses total.



#1 of 10 by toking on Thu Jan 28 21:08:53 1999:

welcome to the poetry confrenece zoe....and what an entrance!

this is incredible...good show


#2 of 10 by zoe on Thu Jan 28 22:24:59 1999:

i write what i feel....


#3 of 10 by orinoco on Fri Jan 29 01:07:54 1999:

"Time is of your essence" is a really cool line.

Oh, and welcome.


#4 of 10 by bookworm on Fri Jan 29 06:33:06 1999:

Cool!  More talent.  Welcome aboard, Zoe.


#5 of 10 by lumen on Fri Jan 29 19:22:30 1999:

Delicious.  'Writing what you feel' is the true artist's touch.  The 
rest is craftmanship and skill.


#6 of 10 by bookworm on Fri Jan 29 23:48:08 1999:

Amen to that!


#7 of 10 by zoe on Sun Jan 31 04:54:43 1999:

c'est la vive... or something..


#8 of 10 by logansan on Mon Feb 1 17:05:29 1999:

        .... even if my heart were not already broken this would have moved
me to tears ... very moving. :)


#9 of 10 by toking on Wed Feb 17 17:34:30 1999:

(linked to the new poetry conf)


#10 of 10 by dea on Wed Jul 14 08:20:07 1999:

what can i say? the words fit like magic and it moved me:)

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