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Grex Poetry Item 85: Silence
Entered by woman on Wed May 12 04:51:01 UTC 1999:

Silence

It's been a long time
since I last held you
in my arms

Your face is only a shadow
surrounded by haze

Your touch has all
but vanished into memories
on a dusty shelf

As a faded picture echoes
of happier times
when reality was not
a dream

Tears start to wet my face
as if my heart is saying
come back to me

Shadows play on the wall
as the candle flickers

When spirits come calling 
into the endless night
searching for the lonely heart.















8 responses total.



#1 of 8 by toking on Wed May 12 13:51:22 1999:

unless I'm mistaken:

Welcome to the poetry confrence woman

I like this piece a lot. It spells out some of the feelings it took me
almost a year to drive away


#2 of 8 by woman on Thu May 13 16:18:51 1999:

Thank you.  Can we really drive away those feelings that we feel with such
intensity?


#3 of 8 by toking on Thu May 13 16:31:43 1999:

I think so...when it gets to that point where we have to push them away
or simply lose it

I don't know, I think I managed to drive them away, but maybe I've just
become desensitized to them. Intensity only lasts as long as our will to
sustain it.


#4 of 8 by woman on Thu May 13 22:36:45 1999:

interesting point.


#5 of 8 by lumen on Wed Jun 2 03:02:41 1999:

Welcome.  You do the Romantics proud.


#6 of 8 by woman on Fri Jun 4 05:19:06 1999:

thankx lumen.


#7 of 8 by bookworm on Thu Jun 17 20:13:49 1999:

Allow me to add my voice to those of us who have already welcomed you.

Good stuff, girl friend.  Keep it up!


#8 of 8 by oswald on Wed Jun 30 01:58:48 1999:

Amazing. Godd job.

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