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razor edge memories
slicing into my mind once again
joyous times and the rememberence of loss
pushing me further
and further
now i cry once more--
for all i had,
that was slaughtered for the sake of blame.
though she stands close
holding my insides
reminding me that i'm still here--
a survivor of the pain of this decade
and i could do it again
and that i will make it through...
*this poem and all other's written by zoe frost are the sole property
of zoe frost or her agent and are not to be copied in whole or in part
without written permision by her or her agent.
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i'm not getting all wierd about my poetry or anything, but my agent told me to type a disclaimer... i don't really feel it is that necicary, but i'm trying to start a book, and its good to have it there just incase..
ahhhh...I lied...I hadn't read this one yet....good show
you can get just as far legally with "(c)1999 Zoe Frost, All Rights Reserved" and it's easier to type. =} anyway, I like this one a lot.
it bout cerrina...
Good stuff. Let me know when your book comes out.
You have always done well, but you are improving your own skills and sense of personal style. Your shorter poems seem more effective, and you are more comfortable with spacing. Have you experimented with lengthening spacing between letters or individual words to control the pace? Zoe, you're getting really good :) Keep up these efforts and best of luck on publishing a book.
thanx lumen... when/if it comes out, you'll be one of the first i send it to..
please do. it was good to meet you yesterday =)
Amen to that.
i almost thought i'd never get to see you guys... it was pure luck that we made it out there.
Not a problem. I believe in miracles. Glad you made it.
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