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Grex Poetry Item 42: "Pure Sap" toking
Entered by toking on Wed Feb 24 12:50:40 UTC 1999:

"Pure Sap"

click
open
now it's all laid before me
in purest clarity
I see it all closing in
or closing down
or slipping and sliding right into place
and I can't or won't hate them anymore
not for what he did 
or what she let happen
I've been walking this path
wandering pseudo-aimlessly
for 21 long years
always hopeless and half blind
without goal or destination
click
open
now I see your face
and everything behind your eyes
and I can forgive the past
not because I've forgotten
but because it has lead (herded) me 
to you

4 responses total.



#1 of 4 by toking on Wed Feb 24 12:51:46 1999:

i hadn't intended this to be quite this sickeningly sappy...but it says
exactly what I wanted it to, so I guess I'l have to live with it <g>


#2 of 4 by bookworm on Fri Feb 26 05:31:21 1999:

As I'm continuously telling people, not everything that's sappy is bad.


#3 of 4 by cloud on Tue Mar 9 01:48:52 1999:

I second that remark.


#4 of 4 by bookworm on Thu Mar 11 07:08:04 1999:

Thank you.  Nice to know somebody besides me appreciates sappiness.

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