spinning in this sphere of intellectualization..
so lost within my own inner complex.
i need to shed this container--
i need to scratch away the scarred surface.
so incredibly trapped.
please...
make the superficial screams of the outside world die away;
forced to my knees in pain,
i implore it to stop.
peel away the angst and regret,
make him see how i love him so...
let him see the reality in my eyes,
so that we may be forever--
so my cold tears and shivering fate can fade into the distance.
these seven walls are suffocating me..
i need to run with all i have.
take my hand and melt into eternity...
we all may fall,
though the choice to jump is inevidable.

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whats on my mind... tear it all apart so i may be free to show you my 
will; my reality, my love...

        .... again the clearity of mind and your purity of spirit transformed
to words/images .... amazing :)

this is beautiful absolutelt wonderful

(toking bows low and gives zoe a red rose)

oops...


(linked to the new poetry conf)

Your eloquence is still superb, zoe.

<lumen tips his hat to zoe>

my thoughts exactly.

I 13 am facinated by the amount of relation upwelling within me.

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