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Grex Poetry Item 311: after the words have gone <rcl>
Entered by rlawson on Fri Jun 14 01:09:41 UTC 2002:

It's funny how memory tends to betray
Thoughts remembered but hardly ever recollected,
the lyrics come and leave the air tense
like the lover leaving the morning after,
you lie awake with eyes closed
waiting, praying for some kind of goodbye--
see you soon, wish you well
or thank you

We keep dancing like this careful not to touch
It's your turn to lead
Latitudes and longitudes,
it's your turn to leave
The music ended long ago;
our sound-track is an almost forgotten tune
Humming mostly, I remember only words like
   always and promise and friends
   and your name

And there's a kiss on my lips
that should have left with you
Now I'm careful not to kiss another
so that when my hair retreats further,
when the twilight of my memory comes,
I'll have something still to remember you by
after all the words have gone

4 responses total.



#1 of 4 by jaklumen on Fri Jun 14 16:40:51 2002:

Nice to see a new post from you after quite a while.  This sounds much 
like a song, too.


#2 of 4 by arianna on Thu Jun 27 00:10:25 2002:

"when my hair retreats further??"


#3 of 4 by rlawson on Sun Jul 14 06:03:16 2002:

Robert's losing his hair.


#4 of 4 by jaklumen on Sun Jul 14 08:52:33 2002:

ooh.

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