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Grex Poetry Item 286: ~untitled {toking} the ending isnt very good...
Entered by bumble on Sun Dec 2 07:28:21 UTC 2001:

so i dream the dream
and all the broken things
seem to mend their ragged seams
my bloodied wings stretch to catch
one last hint of fleeting breath
before fluttered lids
and bright bright light
slap me awake
to the muffled scream
of a well abused alarm clock

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#1 of 1 by jaklumen on Fri Dec 21 06:32:02 2001:

I dunno.. I rather like the jagged ending, as I remember odd dreams 
that were suddenly interrupted by wakefulness.

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