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Grex Poetry Item 285: untitled~ toking
Entered by bumble on Mon Nov 5 09:37:05 UTC 2001:

Feeling like I've fallen
and I'm falling again
left outta michigan
with a chip
on my shoulder
just a little bit smaller
than the distance
of the drive
between here and there
now there's no going back
once you've beat yerself
this far down
parked myself in tucson
with one last paycheck
and half a hope
of letting go
but when i close my eyes
i still see her face
and i could swear
i still feel her hand in mine
no force
no power
no act
of will alone
will make me let go

5 responses total.



#1 of 5 by bumble on Mon Nov 5 09:38:30 2001:

kinda blah, guess it dried up las time...but hey, at least im outta michigan


#2 of 5 by arianna on Thu Nov 15 03:19:32 2001:

where are you now, joe?


#3 of 5 by bumble on Tue Nov 20 05:47:27 2001:

sunny and scenic tucson arizona, land of a thousand thousand thousand 
cacti and rain that smells like chalk tastes :)  the good news is, 
after a month and a half of searching I've finnaly found a poetry open 
mic down here :)


#4 of 5 by xcalibur on Sat Nov 24 18:01:54 2001:

I shall be in Tuscon this coming January.


#5 of 5 by bumble on Fri Nov 30 08:20:13 2001:

cool cool :) whatya coming down here for?

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