the unsteadyness
          of a teenager
                as the body
                     rolls to a
                           stop
                          too far
                go behind
                she waits
                  it's ok

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this one reminds me of 'fridge poetry -- I love 'fridge poetry.

Yes, it does have a magnet poetry feel to it.  This poem invokes images of
learning to drive in my head!  :)

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