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Grex Poetry Item 208: My dear star!
Entered by toww on Sat Sep 2 17:56:36 UTC 2000:

I am trying hard
trying hard to forget you
but all your words you said
those wonderful words
How can I forget them?

All the letters that you wrote to me
I read them and tears come into my eyes
and all the words you spoke
are still fresh in my mind

I had never cried so much
I have never known such a feeling
There is a pain that shoots through my heart
like somebody has cut from it a dear part

But somewhere deep inside
I know you could never have been mine
Like a child who wishes for a star
so far far away

But why is it so hard
however much I try
not to let your thought
engulf my heart!

3 responses total.



#1 of 3 by bumble on Thu Sep 14 17:00:31 2000:

well done my friend, well done
brings back way to many things, especially after getting a call from an ex
the other night


#2 of 3 by freedom on Wed Sep 27 03:16:37 2000:

wow..I really like this a lot....perhaps it home for me on some things...
the only thing I don't like is the part about cutting out a "oart"..i dunno..I
feel like you tried too hard to ryhme there...but I love the rest of it..


#3 of 3 by toww on Thu Sep 28 14:10:05 2000:

yeah. I too had felt a bit odd when writing it but couldn't think of anything
else at the time... Thanks!

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