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Grex Poetry Item 189: Parting
Entered by naveenr on Fri May 5 20:47:41 UTC 2000:

How difficult is this parting,
How do I console my heart,
Its like a kid who would not listen.

You changed me for ever,
Parting you took my soul with you,
What is death for me now or am I dead
Who  should I blame for my misery,
Destiny or me,
Meeting you was an accident,
Who should I blame for it

Part you will from me,
Can you part from my dreams,
I know I am not worthy of your love,
How do I console my heart,
Its like a kid who would not listen

-naveenr@cyberspace.org

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#1 of 2 by ponder on Thu May 11 04:41:23 2000:

I don't understand the purpose of the repetition of the following lines:

"How do I console my heart,
 Its like a kid who would not listen"



#2 of 2 by lumen on Wed May 17 21:59:34 2000:

must be a cultural thing.

Seriously, I think the idea is to envision a kid who got into trouble 
and started crying when the consequences caught up.

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