This light above me
The ground below
The truth blinds me
What it is I do not know

This wall infront of me
Blocking my path
Bordom plagues me
Inspiring its wrath

This dagger hurts me
The wielder turns away
This anger burns me
I have gon astray

This pain stabs me 
I grasp my heart
My rage betrays me
Tearing me apart

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It seems a bit quiet around these parts so I decided to dip into some of my
lesser works. Maybe with some help I can finish/fix them.

yet more happyness i see:) 

hmm....  <flem has an idea...>  

simple, yet nice

The rhythm is kinda wierd on this.  Oddly enough, though, it fits pretty 
well.

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