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Grex > Poetry > #131: Beyond the Elm Tree (redux) / pk | |
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brighn
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Beyond the Elm Tree (redux) / pk
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Sep 30 00:12 UTC 1999 |
Beyond the Elm Tree
Paul Kershaw
4/14 - 9/26/99
These things will I remember:
Honeysuckle and roses in your hair
Salt and powder on your skin
Darkness and fantasy in your eyes
Crimson and taupe on your lips
Light and shadow on your neck
Heat and drawing in your thighs
Motherhood and passion in your arms
Childhood and lust in your breath
These things will I remember:
The buttery silk upon your breasts
The hard points my fingers teased
The catch in your breath
The shift in your body
The warm air against my ear
The moistness of your tongue
The scraping of your teeth
The tangy musk on my lips
These things will I remember:
Shivering
Squeezing
Panting
Tensing
Moaning
Nipping
Tugging
Screaming
These things will I remember:
All is still
Floating, eyes closed
You are somewhere beneath me
Within me
Around me
All is quiet
I have been released
You have been released
In the night,
I close my eyes and I remember
And gently stroke your cold skin
As you decay beside me
In the morning,
I will bury you
Beyond the elm tree
And leave to seek another
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brighn
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response 1 of 7:
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Sep 30 00:12 UTC 1999 |
I posted this a while back, but I was prompted lately to change it
drastically, so I did. =}
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orinoco
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response 2 of 7:
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Sep 30 22:24 UTC 1999 |
... ... Wow. I don't believe I'd seen this before, but I might be wrong.
If I have, the ending came as just as much of a shock the second time around.
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lumen
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response 3 of 7:
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Oct 1 00:05 UTC 1999 |
I remember it. I'm not sure if the material itself is different; it
seems merely to be formatted a different way, to the best of my memory.
Perhaps brighn will point out how it's different?
resp:2 It has retained its shock..
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arianna
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response 4 of 7:
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Oct 1 04:02 UTC 1999 |
dear gods, this kicks all sorts of butt.
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