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dewshine
Poem! Mark Unseen   Jun 22 19:13 UTC 2003

 Creativity

 Thick strokes of a paint brush,
one, two, presto
A picture of emotions
simply alive with fading colours
 Small lines from a pen
three, four, easy as pie
Words telling a tale
for us all to forget
 Knitted yarn on metal sticks
five, six, switch
A cloak to keep us all warm,
on cool summer nights
 The horrible stench of spray paint
seven, eight, glorious
Amazing techinicoloured sunshine,
for the city house gate
 Oh my, she's at it again
nine, ten, beautiful
how words fit together
like a jigsaw puzzle
4 responses total.
starship
response 1 of 4: Mark Unseen   Apr 11 17:33 UTC 2004

hey great poem. i love to write short stories and id like to share some but
im kinda new to grex. How do you make a new thread or whatever its called on
a unix bbs?
cmcgee
response 2 of 4: Mark Unseen   Apr 12 03:53 UTC 2004

Use the "enter" command at an OK: prompt.
tod
response 3 of 4: Mark Unseen   May 12 00:20 UTC 2004

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springne
response 4 of 4: Mark Unseen   Jan 19 15:49 UTC 2006

Hey I'm new too.  Yeah, just type e at the ok prompt.
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