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insanity
Hello Mark Unseen   Apr 19 14:55 UTC 1995

Kiss me.
The sun comes down,
My world lights from with in.
I lay my hands on my heart.
I can feel the world racing with in it.
shadows creep, 
but I am like the sun.
I know what it's like to taste purity.
So softly her voice dances through the trees
I hear them sing with their love of her.
I find myself catching sunlight and starlight
winding them through her hair.
She reminds me of angels
so I take myself down to the edge of the water
I watch her where she stands at the to of the hill.
Eyes of Green ....eyes of blue.
Water in my nose and my mouth,
I become a river.
She becomes a cloud.
This is more than friendship
This is less than love.
This is letting someone in your heart,
finding you can never get enough.
this is letting someone touch your soul,
anyway they want.
this is letting hatred go,
watching yourself come apart.
this is ...what I wish I'd never thought.
3 responses total.
fraizer
response 1 of 3: Mark Unseen   Apr 19 15:47 UTC 1995

The emotoin is awesome. It sounds really personal.
Great line arrangement
insanity
response 2 of 3: Mark Unseen   Apr 19 16:37 UTC 1995

thank you, I liked your poems as well.
morgayn
response 3 of 3: Mark Unseen   Apr 20 00:40 UTC 1995

I really like this poem...
It truly melds opposing things together well...
I like the imagery in it, as well.
I like the "this is friendship, this is less than love".
Truly wonderful portrayal of emotions.
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