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odye
Destructive Love Mark Unseen   Apr 19 04:20 UTC 1995


like a used up junkie
searching for a fresh vein

i'm a moth 
desperately attracted to your flame

the searing touch of a warm embrace,
that turmoiled feeling 
when i see your face

to or not to,
to or not to

a moments passion burning over,
causing wounds so deep that only 
leave angry scars to remember



Uhh... a spur of the moment hack, needs some work, dont
even know what Im trying to say... : )
3 responses total.
fraizer
response 1 of 3: Mark Unseen   Apr 19 15:39 UTC 1995

Cool poem. It souds like you are trying to say you don't know
what you are trying to say.
i love it
odye
response 2 of 3: Mark Unseen   Apr 19 17:31 UTC 1995

Actually, trying to say I dont know what Im trying to say sums up my
whole life, poretty much.... : )
Thanx for the compliment
morgayn
response 3 of 3: Mark Unseen   Apr 20 00:37 UTC 1995

Actually, it looks like you're trying to say, "I'm addicted to you."
I like it.
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