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rickverm
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CREATIVE WRITERS UNITE
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Dec 13 15:32 UTC 1994 |
WRITING IS FUN
Hello, creative writers of the world!
Have you got the same problem as me?
Isn't it a bummer that publishers don't value your work
for what it is?
Well, maybe there is a solution: just like in the late seventies, do it
yourself! O.K., I won't say that this item can take the place of the
bookshelves in your favorite bookstore... but it is a way to check whether
readers like you or not.
So, put in your short stories, a restriction that's necessary, and
discuss writing as it is.
Rick.
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rickverm
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response 1 of 27:
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Dec 13 15:34 UTC 1994 |
I can't wait to see what's going to happen. It can't be only me,
can it?
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abchan
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response 2 of 27:
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Dec 13 16:22 UTC 1994 |
I'd post something I wrote, but it's way too long. I've written four
"scenes" for my Creative Writing class this fall, and each of them are
between 10 and 20 pages long, double spaced and typed. My professor
says I have the potential to write a novel. Now, if I could only
convince my parents that my taking narrative writing next fall will not
be a waste. *sigh* My parents don't take my writing seriously. Of
course, that's not nearly as bad as my prof's dad, who when she got
published and gave him a copy of her short stories, he lent it out to
a friend to read before reading it himself. She was NOT happy.
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rcurl
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response 3 of 27:
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Dec 13 19:30 UTC 1994 |
Hmmmm....actually, I was suggesting entering an Item for each new *work*.
Then that work, and just that work, can be discussed in that Item (until
it drifts into, say, the weather...). But, there are no rules here, so
CREATIVE WRITERS - CREATE!
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rickverm
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response 4 of 27:
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Dec 14 07:01 UTC 1994 |
Sorry Rane, I just realized that after starting this item.
But this is neat as well.
Isn't it bad that so many writers are undervalued for
what they do?
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abchan
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response 5 of 27:
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Dec 14 16:57 UTC 1994 |
Kim nods in agreement with Rick.
My parents never took my writing seriously. I'd be downstairs taping
away at the keyboard creating stories, and they'd yell at me to go do
my homework or study for a test next week. *sigh*
I'm so glad I'm in college now.
And I'm so glad I've found people who DO take my work seriously.
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wannit
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response 6 of 27:
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Dec 14 17:34 UTC 1994 |
Hmmm, that's more credit than I ever got. <not true>.
Friends must not read your stuff, they can never be honest in
reviewing your work.
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orinoco
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response 7 of 27:
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Dec 14 22:10 UTC 1994 |
Damn!
Well, since the d*** computer won't let me just copy and paste from microsoft
word (lines get too long) I'll have to type my story in later
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rcurl
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response 8 of 27:
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Dec 14 22:42 UTC 1994 |
Try copying and pasting into an editor started from here.
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wannit
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response 9 of 27:
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Dec 15 07:00 UTC 1994 |
Is that possible?
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rcurl
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response 10 of 27:
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Dec 15 16:28 UTC 1994 |
Yup.
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remmers
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response 11 of 27:
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Dec 15 18:30 UTC 1994 |
Do it in small chunks though, or the editor may choke.
Another way is to save the wordprocessor document as an ascii text
file and upload it using a transfer protocol such as kermit, xmodem,
or zmodem.
But we don't want this item to get too techie; want it to be
creative instead. So I'll enter a poem that I made up in the
last two nanoseconds:
I think that I shall never spy
A poem lovely as an I-
tem.
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orinoco
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response 12 of 27:
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Dec 15 22:47 UTC 1994 |
how do I use xmodem?
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rickverm
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response 13 of 27:
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Dec 16 07:16 UTC 1994 |
THat's what I would like to know too.
Typing is fun.
I've made up a X-mas story.
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brighn
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response 14 of 27:
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Dec 17 00:49 UTC 1994 |
Actually, wannit, some friends can be honest... I know.
At any rate, they're only opinions. I love my babies just because they're
my babies.
MY shortest current story is round about 23 pages right now, a bit too long
for the Grex crowd, I fear. But anyone who wants a copy of my long
out-of-print novel should track me down and grab a copy... I have
hundreds, and they all want good homes. Promise to read it and you can
have it free. :)
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orinoco
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response 15 of 27:
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Dec 17 21:09 UTC 1994 |
xmodem attempt #1
daniel b velleman
He was 17. He rolled the thought around in his head, and
reached for the snooze button. It took him a few minutes to
realize it. He was 17. He was 17. 17 years old.
Which meant he could drive. RAs soon as you pass driverUs ed,S they had said.
RAs soon as we think your readyS RWhen we get a new car.S Well, he was
through driverUs ed, they thought he was ready,
and they were getting a new car. Never mind that their old
car was clunky, and falling apart. Never mind that they
would have his head if he wrecked it. He was 17.
By the end of the week, he had his new car, his parentUs old
car. The first thing he did was install a new sound system
. Well, the first thing he did was drive across the
neighborUs lawn, but once he got down the driveway
successfully, he got a new sound system with a tape player
that worked and decent speakers and a high price tag. And,
after learning how not to back into the neighborUs lawn, he
was ready to roll.
That weekend, a few of his friends and he rode in his car
down to the carnival for a day of fun. The three of them
stopped at the fortune-tellers booth, and pretended that
the old lady in the gypsy costume really could see into the
future. His friends got the six of diamonds--unhappy
romance--and the two of hearts--good fortune. He got the Ace
of spades. Death.
None of them belived a word of it, of course, and they joked
about it on their way home. And after he dropped his friend
off, he set off, alone, for a drive in the country.
He didnUt see the truck. It didnUt have itUs lights on, as
it roared on through the night, and he didnUt see it until it
was too late. He screamed, it swerved, and he crashed into
itUs side, and he flew forward as it tossed his car to the
side. His windsheild shattered, and he smashed into the
dashboard, and heard a click as he struck the tape player,
and he flew backwards, as his car acellerated towards the
truck. He ricoched backwards off itUs side, his windsheild
rushing back together. His car backed away from the truck,
and a scream flew back through his open lips. He looked
down at the tape deck--the rewind button was pressed. He
looked at his watch--midnight.
As soon as he got over the initial shock, he was very
excited. Nothing bad could ever happen to him--if it did,
he would just rewind. If he ran out of money, he could
rewind until before he had spent it. As long as...
As long as he never went before last week, before he got the
car, or after midnight, he would be safe. But that meant he
could only keep on reliving the past week over and over. He
would take that over death any day, though. And so, he
spent the next few weeks going to the carnival with his
friends, eating too much candy, and drawing the ace of
spades in the old gypsyUs booth, over and over and over.
For a while it was fun, spending every day with his pals.
And he discovered that he didnUt have to do things the same
way the second time around. He could do anything that he
wanted! And then it happened. After all of the weeks of
fun, he lost track of the time.
It happened late one night. He was driving along the same
country road he had driven along every night since the
crash. He looked down at his watch; the second hand
staggered drunkenly across the face. He looked at the clock
on his dashboard. 00:00 00:00 00:00 it
blinked at him. Calm down he said to himself. YouUll
recognize the spot where it happened, and rewind there.
ItUs ok. He didnUt belive a word he was saying.
He never saw the truck.
They both swerved, this time, and skidded towards each other.
The back of the truck swung around, and flicked his car
sideways, as he flew forwards and struck the dashboard.
There was a click, and everything stopped.
Time passed.
He just hung in midair, with the side of his arm against the
stop button. He had stopped. He was stopped for good. The
police found him that way, hanging in the air, with his face
staring, unseeing, at the ground.
Meanwhile, the carnival prepared to close up. The Rold gypsy
womanS removed her costume, and walked to the parking lot,
casually shuffling her cards. Once in her car, she casually
drew a card--the ace of spades. She laughed, as she turned
the key in the ignition, and drove off into the night.
Those capital R's and U's before and after words are quotes, the U's and S's
are apostophes
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kami
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response 16 of 27:
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Dec 19 06:17 UTC 1994 |
Wow! Not bad. Reminds me of the sort of thing one might see in Omni magazine.
Looked far too conventional, if well done, until you got to the bit about
the tape deck. Nice divice. Good style for you.
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wannit
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response 17 of 27:
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Dec 19 07:15 UTC 1994 |
Good show, ole' chum.
This is what this item is about!
More?
Rick.
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orinoco
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response 18 of 27:
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Dec 19 14:29 UTC 1994 |
Y thank U!
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rickverm
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response 19 of 27:
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Dec 19 16:20 UTC 1994 |
Much obliged (since Penniwyse and me are the same person)
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rickverm
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response 20 of 27:
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Dec 19 16:48 UTC 1994 |
Writers, join Agora 1 (Autumn conf.).
I have contributed a genuine Christmas carol to it.
Though it is RE # 581.
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rickverm
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response 21 of 27:
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Dec 21 07:21 UTC 1994 |
By the way, folks.
Is there someone that speaks two lingos?
My translating into English isn't a thing I can do just
like that.
<from Dutch, that is>
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kami
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response 22 of 27:
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Dec 21 17:38 UTC 1994 |
I speak Spanish, but not well enough to write poetry.
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rickverm
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response 23 of 27:
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Dec 22 13:19 UTC 1994 |
Since it is the purpose that I should keep things going on, here
is a proposition:
I am fully aware that there is difficulty in sending complete
stories to Grex. In fact, a friend had done for me once.
So, maybe I could keep this item rolling by suggesting that
I'll be somekind of referee. I'll ask him how he has done it
(it can be read in Autumn Agora 1 (somewhere around 571 or so))
after that I'll write somekind of manual here.
Chin up and be proud of your creative drive!
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wannit
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response 24 of 27:
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Dec 23 07:36 UTC 1994 |
Merry christmas
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