| Grex > Poetry > #9: time |  |
| time | 
Jan 28 20:32 UTC 1999 |
allow this all to go away, tortured tears will wash it all away... time is of your essence, i have none to spare. happenings are happening, changes are changing. the lords name was vain to me. hours are my seconds, condensed and put away. disappointment, this is all my disappointment. falling up and floating down, i want to just fade away. to you, i have no voice, i have no faith-- my existance is minimal... i hope you are satisfied. the click-click of the hateful red hand, clawing at the iron bars.. monotone lectures lulling me to sleep. sleep my child, sleep-- so your soul may be recaptured with the morning's break. see the world of ice blue glass.. forgive them for what they have done. just go away, your tortured tears will surely wash this painful world away....
| response 1 of 10: |
Jan 28 21:08 UTC 1999 |
welcome to the poetry confrenece zoe....and what an entrance! this is incredible...good show
| response 2 of 10: |
Jan 28 22:24 UTC 1999 |
i write what i feel....
| response 3 of 10: |
Jan 29 01:07 UTC 1999 |
"Time is of your essence" is a really cool line. Oh, and welcome.
| response 4 of 10: |
Jan 29 06:33 UTC 1999 |
Cool! More talent. Welcome aboard, Zoe.
| response 5 of 10: |
Jan 29 19:22 UTC 1999 |
Delicious. 'Writing what you feel' is the true artist's touch. The rest is craftmanship and skill.
| response 6 of 10: |
Jan 29 23:48 UTC 1999 |
Amen to that!
| response 7 of 10: |
Jan 31 04:54 UTC 1999 |
c'est la vive... or something..
| response 8 of 10: |
Feb 1 17:05 UTC 1999 |
.... even if my heart were not already broken this would have moved me to tears ... very moving. :)
| response 9 of 10: |
Feb 17 17:34 UTC 1999 |
(linked to the new poetry conf)
| response 10 of 10: |
Jul 14 08:20 UTC 1999 |
what can i say? the words fit like magic and it moved me:)