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zoe
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Survivor of the Decade
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Apr 21 19:30 UTC 1999 |
razor edge memories
slicing into my mind once again
joyous times and the rememberence of loss
pushing me further
and further
now i cry once more--
for all i had,
that was slaughtered for the sake of blame.
though she stands close
holding my insides
reminding me that i'm still here--
a survivor of the pain of this decade
and i could do it again
and that i will make it through...
*this poem and all other's written by zoe frost are the sole property
of zoe frost or her agent and are not to be copied in whole or in part
without written permision by her or her agent.
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zoe
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response 1 of 11:
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Apr 21 19:34 UTC 1999 |
i'm not getting all wierd about my poetry or anything, but my agent
told me to type a disclaimer... i don't really feel it is that
necicary, but i'm trying to start a book, and its good to have it there
just incase..
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toking
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response 2 of 11:
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Apr 22 04:04 UTC 1999 |
ahhhh...I lied...I hadn't read this one yet....good show
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brighn
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response 3 of 11:
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Apr 22 22:28 UTC 1999 |
you can get just as far legally with "(c)1999 Zoe Frost, All Rights Reserved"
and it's easier to type. =}
anyway, I like this one a lot.
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zoe
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response 4 of 11:
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Apr 25 23:55 UTC 1999 |
it bout cerrina...
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bookworm
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response 5 of 11:
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Apr 27 22:29 UTC 1999 |
Good stuff. Let me know when your book comes out.
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lumen
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response 6 of 11:
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Jun 2 02:16 UTC 1999 |
You have always done well, but you are improving your own skills and
sense of personal style. Your shorter poems seem more effective, and
you are more comfortable with spacing.
Have you experimented with lengthening spacing between letters or
individual words to control the pace?
Zoe, you're getting really good :) Keep up these efforts and best of
luck on publishing a book.
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zoe
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response 7 of 11:
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Jun 4 19:09 UTC 1999 |
thanx lumen... when/if it comes out, you'll be one of the first i send
it to..
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lumen
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response 8 of 11:
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Jun 15 02:20 UTC 1999 |
please do. it was good to meet you yesterday =)
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bookworm
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response 9 of 11:
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Jun 17 20:01 UTC 1999 |
Amen to that.
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zoe
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response 10 of 11:
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Jun 22 16:11 UTC 1999 |
i almost thought i'd never get to see you guys... it was pure luck that
we made it out there.
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bookworm
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response 11 of 11:
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Jun 22 17:19 UTC 1999 |
Not a problem. I believe in miracles. Glad you made it.
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