| Grex > Poetry > #57: "Silence" toking |
| "Silence" toking | 
Mar 12 19:29 UTC 1999 |
"Silence" Silence A small spot of emptiness Where echos cease to exist And the gentle thump thump Chug thump Skips a chug or a thump And I could swear it's a heart attack Or the beginning of my demise But I close my eyes And clench my teeth And there you are Pristine clarity shows me the way I reach out Touch your hand And the silence stops The spot is filled
| response 1 of 3: |
Mar 12 21:40 UTC 1999 |
"skips a chug or a thump" - nice allusive way of describing it.
| response 2 of 3: |
Mar 15 23:52 UTC 1999 |
I agree
| response 3 of 3: |
Apr 13 04:45 UTC 1999 |
This is lovely.