"Reawakening" toking

Mar 10 10:55 UTC 1999

"Reawakening"  J. Parish     10MAR99


I walk to her
Full of hope 
And something else
Her bronzed alabaster skin
Taunts and teases with perfection
I know not the form of breath
And click of tongue
To speak the words 
Which weigh my heart
I kneel before her
Not pleading or praying
Only acknowledging
And desire that it be enough
Her saphire and emerald gaze
Draws the words from my lips
Entices hidden knowledge
And frees my mind to speak its peace
   "I come with love,
    Not fear or awe,
    Bearing no ill intent.
    I come to rejoice,
    I stray no longer,
    As I have beheld your face"
She slowly smiles and draws me forth
With single thought and single breath
Comes her only reply
   "The time has come,
    Forgetting was easy,
    Though you've had your fill,
    Now you learn again."

response 2 of 11:

Mar 11 01:33 UTC 1999

you know what you see... 

response 4 of 11:

Mar 11 18:11 UTC 1999

resp: 1

I'm mildly disturbed by that Jon, I'm not quite sure how this could be
seen as depressing or desperate.  Care to explain?

response 6 of 11:

Mar 12 16:51 UTC 1999

hmmm..O.K.

Maybe I see your point, however, this was deffinately not meant in that
sense.

what my "perfect woman" (your words, not mine) meant by "Now you learn
again" is more to the efect of "O.K. you've let yourself forget all the
silly bullshit, you've cleaned your slate, now lets fill it with
something usefull"

    Forgetting was easy,
    Though you've had your fill,
    Now you learn again


mayhap you could suggest a way to clarify that?

response 8 of 11:

Mar 16 04:51 UTC 1999

hmmm...please don't be cryptic, it does very little good

aka...huh...you wanna sp

grrr

aka...you wanna `splain that? while your at it, distrust the source all ye
want,  but kindly offer advice

response 10 of 11:

Apr 1 12:01 UTC 1999

                       "Reawakening"   v2   04/01/99

I walk to her                             He stands beside her
Full of hope                              Filled with wisdom
And something else                        And all the worlds strength
Her bronzed alabaster skin                His thickened chest
Taunts and teases with perfection         Barely moves with incoming
air                                                
I know not the form of breath             I know not the form of breath
And click of tongue                       And click of tongue
To speak the words                        To speak the words
Which weigh my heart                      Which weigh my heart
I kneel before her                        I rise to his call
Not pleading or praying                   Thrusting arms behind me
Only acknowledging                        Seeking no offense
And desire that it be enough              And pray that it be enough
Her saphire and emerald gaze              His iron and granite voice
Draws the words from my lips              Forces thoughts through lips
Entices hidden knowledge                  Bids that I but speak my mind
And frees my mind to speak its peace      And free it simply to breath
  "I come with love,                        "I come with love,
   Not fear or awe,                          Not fear or awe,
   Bearing no ill intent.                    Bearing no ill intent.
   I come to rejoice,                        I come to rejoice,
   I stray no longer,                        I stray no longer,
   As I have beheld your face"               As I have beheld yourface"
She smiles and draws me forth             He nods and draws me in  
With single thought and single            With single thoguth and
single                         breath                                   
breath
Comes her only reply                      Comes his one reply
  "The time has come,                       "The time has come, 
   Forgetting was easy,                      Forgetting was easy,
   Though you've had your fill,              Though you've had your fill 
   Now you learn again."                     Now you learn again."





I knew I had to do the second part when I wrote the first...I was just
too lazy.....