Grex Poetry Conference Item 44

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hazy truth

Mar 4 00:37 UTC 1999

  Emotions are the cloud blinding us from the truth
  They take our sight and pervert it into what it is not,
  But ^Qtis nary a person who can withstand a life without love,
  A life without hate, a life without faith, and ultimately a life 
without passion. 
  Just take a moment to ponder opon the idea of a world where emotions 
are non-existant,
  doust thou posses the nerve and will to do so? 
  As for I no amount of power could force me to do so,
  For emotions are the breath of all life in the hevans and hell,
  along with all in between including the earth we live opon.

4 responses total.

toking

response 1 of 4:

Mar 4 17:27 UTC 1999

welcome lordseth

this seems like a good idea, but it ;acks a sense of
completeness....leaving things unfinished is good sometimes, but this
particular topic seems injured by the lack of completion

bookworm

response 2 of 4:

Mar 8 06:23 UTC 1999

Good poetry always needs improvement.

toking

response 3 of 4:

Mar 8 12:12 UTC 1999

no..I don't think I could ever agree with that particular statement

bookworm

response 4 of 4:

Mar 8 19:15 UTC 1999

Okay.  Mmm... H'bout this
Improvement is good.

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