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toking
"Pure Sap" toking Mark Unseen   Feb 24 12:50 UTC 1999

"Pure Sap"

click
open
now it's all laid before me
in purest clarity
I see it all closing in
or closing down
or slipping and sliding right into place
and I can't or won't hate them anymore
not for what he did 
or what she let happen
I've been walking this path
wandering pseudo-aimlessly
for 21 long years
always hopeless and half blind
without goal or destination
click
open
now I see your face
and everything behind your eyes
and I can forgive the past
not because I've forgotten
but because it has lead (herded) me 
to you
4 responses total.
toking
response 1 of 4: Mark Unseen   Feb 24 12:51 UTC 1999

i hadn't intended this to be quite this sickeningly sappy...but it says
exactly what I wanted it to, so I guess I'l have to live with it <g>
bookworm
response 2 of 4: Mark Unseen   Feb 26 05:31 UTC 1999

As I'm continuously telling people, not everything that's sappy is bad.
cloud
response 3 of 4: Mark Unseen   Mar 9 01:48 UTC 1999

I second that remark.
bookworm
response 4 of 4: Mark Unseen   Mar 11 07:08 UTC 1999

Thank you.  Nice to know somebody besides me appreciates sappiness.
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