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zoe
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confused...
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Feb 16 02:35 UTC 1999 |
spinning in this sphere of intellectualization..
so lost within my own inner complex.
i need to shed this container--
i need to scratch away the scarred surface.
so incredibly trapped.
please...
make the superficial screams of the outside world die away;
forced to my knees in pain,
i implore it to stop.
peel away the angst and regret,
make him see how i love him so...
let him see the reality in my eyes,
so that we may be forever--
so my cold tears and shivering fate can fade into the distance.
these seven walls are suffocating me..
i need to run with all i have.
take my hand and melt into eternity...
we all may fall,
though the choice to jump is inevidable.
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zoe
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response 1 of 7:
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Feb 16 02:36 UTC 1999 |
whats on my mind... tear it all apart so i may be free to show you my
will; my reality, my love...
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logansan
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response 2 of 7:
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Feb 17 18:13 UTC 1999 |
.... again the clearity of mind and your purity of spirit transformed
to words/images .... amazing :)
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toking
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response 3 of 7:
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Feb 17 19:52 UTC 1999 |
this is beautiful absolutelt wonderful
(toking bows low and gives zoe a red rose)
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toking
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response 4 of 7:
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Feb 17 19:52 UTC 1999 |
oops...
(linked to the new poetry conf)
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lumen
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response 5 of 7:
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Feb 18 00:41 UTC 1999 |
Your eloquence is still superb, zoe.
<lumen tips his hat to zoe>
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bookworm
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response 6 of 7:
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Feb 22 07:40 UTC 1999 |
my thoughts exactly.
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lordseth
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response 7 of 7:
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Feb 26 15:56 UTC 1999 |
I 13 am facinated by the amount of relation upwelling within me.
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