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Grex > Poetry > #286: ~untitled {toking} the ending isnt very good...
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bumble
~untitled {toking} the ending isnt very good... Mark Unseen   Dec 2 07:28 UTC 2001
so i dream the dream
and all the broken things
seem to mend their ragged seams
my bloodied wings stretch to catch
one last hint of fleeting breath
before fluttered lids
and bright bright light
slap me awake
to the muffled scream
of a well abused alarm clock
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jaklumen
response 1 of 1: Mark Unseen   Dec 21 06:32 UTC 2001
I dunno.. I rather like the jagged ending, as I remember odd dreams 
that were suddenly interrupted by wakefulness.
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