Grex Poetry Conference Item 275

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blech

Aug 13 19:31 UTC 2001

Not sure what to call this, it's not really a poem, maybe a part of a 
song, who knows




make it not
make it not
make it not
make it not
remember me
make it not
make it not
make it not
make it not
remember me

sometimes i find myself
insdie myself
beside myself
inside myself
theres just a little bit of doubt
thats just not sure
if it can remember my name

make it not
make it not
make it not
make it not
remember me
make it not
make it not
make it not
make it not
remember me

sometimes i find myself
insdie myself
beside myself
inside myself
theres just a little bit of doubt
thats just not sure
if it can remember my name

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arianna

response 1 of 2:

Aug 14 01:17 UTC 2001

Ever read _Kabuki_, by David MAck?  There's panels in the "Circle of Blood"
collection that remind me of the "make itnot" stanzas, where she's
superimposed over words that repeat.  neat stuff.

bumble

response 2 of 2:

Aug 16 16:58 UTC 2001

Thought I had a heart
That night it fell apart
Thought that i would die
Thought that i would cry
But all that   
I    could   do
Was 
SCREAM

make it not
make it not
make it not
make it not
re mem ber me
make it not
make it not
make it not
make it not
re mem ber me

sometimes i find myself
insdie myself
beside myself
inside myself
theres just a little bit of doubt
thats just not sure
if it can remember my name

make it not
make it not
make it not
make it not
re mem ber me
make it not
make it not
make it not
make it not
re mem ber me

sometimes i find myself
insdie myself
beside myself
inside myself
theres just a little bit of doubt
thats just not sure
if it can remember my name

Thought I had a heart
That night it fell apart
Thought that i would die
Thought that i would cry
But all that   
I    could   do
Was 
SCREAM

Little piece of me
Broke  that  night
Little bit of you
Made  it  right

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