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prodigal
untitled Mark Unseen   Jun 1 00:56 UTC 2001

     the unsteadyness
          of a teenager
                as the body
                     rolls to a
                           stop
                          too far
                go behind
                she waits
                  it's ok
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arianna
response 1 of 2: Mark Unseen   Jul 18 21:47 UTC 2001

this one reminds me of 'fridge poetry -- I love 'fridge poetry.
rlawson
response 2 of 2: Mark Unseen   Aug 12 21:32 UTC 2001

Yes, it does have a magnet poetry feel to it.  This poem invokes images of
learning to drive in my head!  :)
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