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toking
"62,400" toking Mark Unseen   Feb 5 11:23 UTC 1999

62,400 repetitions
that's what they say
that's what you need for a single truth
62,400 repetitions
and I have forgotten
I have forgotten
I have forgotten
I have forgotten
ohh dear god, 
62,396 to go
how can I survive?
and I have forgotten
I have forgotten
I have forgotten
I have forgotten
PLEASE! I'M RUNNING OUT OF TIME
62,392 to go
and I"ve only 60 years to make it
and I have forgotten
I have forgotten
I have forgotten
I have forgotten
PLEASE! I can still smell his breath
62,388 to go
before I die I just want to say
that I have forgotten
I have forgotten
I have forgotten
I have forgotten
15 responses total.
lumen
response 1 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 5 23:49 UTC 1999

I'm not sure I understand this poem.  Where did you get the number 
62,400?

Other than not understanding the content, the style doesn't particularly 
strike me.
cloud
response 2 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 6 01:39 UTC 1999

Personally, I like the esoteric nature of this.  It remindes me vaguely of
the "six degrees of seperation" shtick.

Here's the plot, as I read it: Some person has a had a very traumatic
experience.  He's trying to forget it, but he won't, for whatever reason,
untill he's said it 62400 times (and probably won't then).

"I have forgotten," is of course, what he's trying to make true, but isn't.

I really like this.  I get a very scary, panicy type of "mood" off it.  Well
done.
toking
response 3 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 6 06:01 UTC 1999

I've yet too read the book, but I just watched the movie "Brave New 
World" 62,400 repetitions of the same idea is what it takes to 
condition that idea into fact
cloud
response 4 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 6 15:30 UTC 1999

Oh, yes, that's right.  Read the book, BTW, it's much, much better.  I'd have
to say it's one of the few books that have genuinly scared me.
jazz
response 5 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 6 19:26 UTC 1999

        It's much easier to make someone believe it's a fact - three to
fourteen.
brighn
response 6 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 6 23:28 UTC 1999

but it's nearly impossible to make yourself belief some things... especially
"I have forgotten." The more you say it, the more you're focussing on what
you're trying to forget =}
bookworm
response 7 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 00:39 UTC 1999

Um...  This one's a little deep for me.
zoe
response 8 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 03:07 UTC 1999

i finally got off my ass and read this one.. i like... 62,400 
repetitions make one disgusting lie... i told you that you'd enjoy the 
movie...
brighn
response 9 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 04:57 UTC 1999

Are we refering to the 1998 Peter Gallagher version (which I haven't seen),
or the 1980 version (which was pretty good)? both were TV movies.

The Huxley novel, at any rate, was at one time my favorite novel. I read it
in the neighborhood of 7 times.
toking
response 10 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 12:57 UTC 1999

I'm assuming its the `98 version
zoe
response 11 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 15:10 UTC 1999

it was on  last year so i supose it would be the'98 version... besides, 
it was pretty modern..
toking
response 12 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 15:17 UTC 1999

ehhh?  how'd you manage to get on at 10 in the morning?
zoe
response 13 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 16:08 UTC 1999

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zoe
response 14 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 8 16:10 UTC 1999

i'm came home sick from school... :)
toking
response 15 of 15: Mark Unseen   Feb 17 18:50 UTC 1999

(linked to the new peotry conf)
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