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toww
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My dear star!
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Sep 2 17:56 UTC 2000 |
I am trying hard
trying hard to forget you
but all your words you said
those wonderful words
How can I forget them?
All the letters that you wrote to me
I read them and tears come into my eyes
and all the words you spoke
are still fresh in my mind
I had never cried so much
I have never known such a feeling
There is a pain that shoots through my heart
like somebody has cut from it a dear part
But somewhere deep inside
I know you could never have been mine
Like a child who wishes for a star
so far far away
But why is it so hard
however much I try
not to let your thought
engulf my heart!
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| 3 responses total. |
bumble
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response 1 of 3:
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Sep 14 17:00 UTC 2000 |
well done my friend, well done
brings back way to many things, especially after getting a call from an ex
the other night
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freedom
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response 2 of 3:
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Sep 27 03:16 UTC 2000 |
wow..I really like this a lot....perhaps it home for me on some things...
the only thing I don't like is the part about cutting out a "oart"..i dunno..I
feel like you tried too hard to ryhme there...but I love the rest of it..
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toww
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response 3 of 3:
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Sep 28 14:10 UTC 2000 |
yeah. I too had felt a bit odd when writing it but couldn't think of anything
else at the time... Thanks!
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