| Grex > Poetry > #205: I am afraid |
| I am afraid | 
Aug 10 14:59 UTC 2000 |
My first shot at poetry:-) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I fear I might fall, perhaps I have already. I wish I have a friend forever No one has been for long ever I was afraid of coming near you but my heart refused to agree... I felt happy though and cheerful and I refused to listen to my head. I am playing wantonly and feeling happy like a child who doesn't know... his playing hour is about to end my mind whispers to me and that fear comes back again I want to say more my friend but... my heart has lost this small fight with me again!
| response 1 of 7: |
Aug 14 13:16 UTC 2000 |
Since there have not been any response till now, I would assume this was bad poetry. :) So I would guess, I better keep my hands of it ;)
| response 2 of 7: |
Aug 14 14:22 UTC 2000 |
eh... never assume anything about a lack of comments. most poems are only passingly commented on, if at all, and when I comment, it's usually negative.
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Aug 14 19:02 UTC 2000 |
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| response 4 of 7: |
Aug 14 19:24 UTC 2000 |
I am taking this as encouragement then, Paul. ;) Folks, be prepared to tolerate some more of this kind...!
| response 5 of 7: |
Sep 27 03:19 UTC 2000 |
its nice..!!! Cute..innocent! :) keep at it!
| response 6 of 7: |
Sep 28 13:59 UTC 2000 |
Really!!! (my). What an irony! (sorry, you wont understand :). I have read your poems (freedom) and in a way they are my inspiration! Thanks.
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Nov 15 18:56 UTC 2000 |